That scene between Susan and Edmund was HAAARRRD. So may plot holes kept popping up and it took everything to patch them up! It all seemed to come together in the end, though, which (happily) made the scene with Lord Dar all the more significant. There was a loud "whew!" on my part once that was fixed!
And... uh... I made myself cry picturing Obax. That's good for a writer, right?
We spoke of Milletpeck already. She's just... she's just special. She's the wise person in the room that everyone ceases talking to hear. Or makes sure she's got a place to sit, enough food to eat, are you comfortable? and the like. We all know someone like that.
DING DING DING! You are correct re: Anradin and Bree! Which is why I chose him and realized "Oh crap, there needs to be mention of horses at this time... oh crap, this is about when Bree was kidnapped, too!" Happy accident. The story was blessedly riddled with them.
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Date: 2012-04-16 07:38 am (UTC)And... uh... I made myself cry picturing Obax. That's good for a writer, right?
We spoke of Milletpeck already. She's just... she's just special. She's the wise person in the room that everyone ceases talking to hear. Or makes sure she's got a place to sit, enough food to eat, are you comfortable? and the like. We all know someone like that.
DING DING DING! You are correct re: Anradin and Bree! Which is why I chose him and realized "Oh crap, there needs to be mention of horses at this time... oh crap, this is about when Bree was kidnapped, too!" Happy accident. The story was blessedly riddled with them.